Story based on 'The Pedestrian', by Ray Bradbury

Okay, so for English I have to write a short story based on a story we have studied in class. As someone who normally writes stories tat are rather long and have deep, complex back stories for all characters, I couldn't help doing this with my English story. I feel the need to write the longer version and I thought I would share it with all of you, so I hope you like it. I will be posting a new paragraph every other day, and that's about it really.