When good goes bad
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Ongoing7m
Last published Tue, Jul 3, 2018
This is my first story that I made on here so let me hear what I need to do to get better......I'm apologizing in advance about my grammar and punctuation.
It started late in the night I was looking over my city when I heard the scream from a women in the distance. The next thing I knew I was standing in between a tall, rugged, mysteriously hot man and this distressed women. "Stand down!" I demanded but all he did was give me this sexy smirk that looked like trouble then everything went black.
Was it sweet justice or just a mistake?
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