Shattered World

Drew's family dead and his home destroyed. He couldn't think of what to do. He sat in the pouring rain on the hill in front of his collapsed home. The only thing that he knew was that he would pay for this. No matter how long it took. He would finish this once and for all. " Shatters, prepare for war"

Okay, hi there, I'm the author and I just wanted to say that I'm just starting out and some constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.