One More Run!

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Votes 2
Parts 1
Time 1h 18m

Reads 43
Votes 2
Parts 1
Time 1h 18m

This is my first epic fantasy short story, I am looking for feedback and reviews. This is my first written work, I hope i get some help :)All Rights Reserved

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One More Run!
Wed, Jun 20, 2018

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One More Run!
Wed, Jun 20, 2018

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