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Emilia just sat there. shocked in what she just witnessed. cold on the ground lays her brother and the shaky medal of the knife lands in the hand of her adoptive father. She knew he wasnt very fond of them but to go that far to kill her only family was too much for her 15 year old brain to handle. All she felt was hatred and grief but the only thing she could set aside was the fact that she could be next. All he did was drop a bowl of cereal and it costed him his 8 year old life. Emilia needs to find her way out of the next problems she may face and along the way figure out how she can handle her feelings toward others and figue out if its worth to save a life of a stranger or risk her own for a small chance of love.
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SOOO we obviously didn't make the deadline lol. This story is unfinished and will remain that way. This is the best example of a rushed concept with no actual plot lol. I wrote blind and hated most of what I had written. I've redesigned this concept and I'm rewriting it with a stronger concept and a laid-out plot. I will release the rewrite when it's done. I'm keeping this published so I can look back at my growth and so others can also see the transformation if they are interested. [ROUND THREE QUALIFIER] Simone's family is her life until she is called as one of the hundred winners given a chance at a new life. When Simone Moss enters the Healthy Human Dome, she is pushed into a deadly game that challenges her in every way possible. While this dark game is filled with blood, it also forces her to face her inner demons and grow in unexpected ways. "Every life you take raises the price of your own. Are you worth more than any of them?" This is my entry to the 2021 Open Novella Contest. Thank you for reading, commenting, and voting. This is my first story outside of fantasy as well as my first 3rd person story. Good or bad, I'd love to hear what you think, it'll help me grow as a writer.

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