10 Mistakes ago (a Star Wars fanfiction)

Metellos was an ordinary planet in the Star Wars galaxy. Many people would compare it to Earth, call it plain and even boring. But being 16 years old in a school where rivalry between groups is taken a bit too far would definitely make for a good story. Now add the fact that the Empire is ruling all throughout this planet. Is that interesting enough of a story?

This novel written from the perspective of Simon Niel, back when the story starts nothing more than a simple 16-year-old teenager, explains his actions and reactions when he realized everything he thought he knew was a lie.

If you find the writing of this novel bad, focus on the story. If you find the story boring, focus on the writing. If both suck... look, just read it!