The Inferior
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New Found America- built on intelligence and superiority. With the Final Intelligence Test (FIT), students, once they reach the age of 16, are given various scenarios to test the extent of how they utilize each of the five senses, along with their ability to think critically under high stress. The results of this test are set into 6 categories, from lowest to highest; One, Two, Three, Four, Five and Six. Each score has a symbol, which is branded onto the left forearm once the test is complete, marking individuals according to their result.
When Ellie Denton receives a prefect score on her FIT, she is drafted to be the face of The Agency, to train alongside the elite, and very small numbered, group of Sixs.
Now the fate of the entire continent lays in Ellies hands. When the Agency threatens to kill her mother, Ellie must make a choice. Does she protect the only family she has left, or sit and watch thousands of innocent lives get ripped from humanity?
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