My Mountain's Secret
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A story in which a young boy believes strongly in a secret that no one believes in.
In the midst of the daunting and mighty Atlas mountains, in a pristine and lushly forest, hides our hero's secret, a secret that should never be unveiled.
This is actually the main body of a story I decided to write. When I'll finish it I'll kind of rewrite it by adding details and making it better using you feedback.
Enjoy!
P.S.: I mostly speak french so please sorry my wrongly used expressions and please give some feedback.
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