Struggling To Possibly Survive

Struggling To Possibly Survive

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In this book I just got creative with ideas and such. (Note: the following summary literally tells you the whole story so just beware.) Peyton is 7 and lives with her parents in Springfield. Her mother treats her really harshly, and she longs to run away. Peyton's mother and father die in a car accident ten years later. She is left feeling both relieved and frustrated. Her two other older brothers go off to college, and they become her legal guardians. They move to Los Angeles and she is forced to start a new life there. She had no friends in Springfield, so she had nothing to really lose. The new school is both exciting, but horrifying. She makes new friends, and meets Luke. Though he is popular, he seems sweet, unlike how she expected him to be. Should she trust him? Will he get along with her older brothers? Will he still stay with Peyton after he learns the truth about her past? Please give me as much feedback as possible. Thanks and Enjoy!
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