Labyrinth
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Enrick is study to be a doctor on his home planet Labyrinth while his best friend, Edlier, has been study in his father's Astrolab for four years on another planet, Psuedohyde. Enrick hasn't heard from Edlier for two years, but suddenly gets a letter from his sister that says he was taken by the enemies and now the entire System is in great danger as the two strongest enemies join forces and their plans are kept secret. This started as a competitive short story, but never turned it in, 'cause laziness, anyways. It had to start with "the letter could not have come at a worse time" I'm not finished yet, but let me know what you think, I'd really appreciate it!
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