𝔭𝔢𝔯𝔰𝔢𝔲𝔰
  • Reads 125,427
  • Votes 3,217
  • Parts 28
  • Time 5h 23m
  • Reads 125,427
  • Votes 3,217
  • Parts 28
  • Time 5h 23m
Complete, First published Jun 27, 2018
*after the third book of TOA so SPOILERS* 

Percy Jackson is no stranger to tragedy. He has lost so many people and has sacrificed so much ever since he found out he was a demigod. Now, a tragedy shakes Percy to his core and causes him to question his blind loyalty to the Olympians - who have done nothing for him. 

Then someone shows up and offers him a way out. A way to avenge all of his friends who are dead because of the gods' carelessness. 

With a war brewing, Percy must figure out what side he is on. Because there is no going back.

  ~ First novel so grammar and writing might be a little special ~ 
Edit: V e r y special, you have been warned, save yourself while you can 

Disclaimer: 

I do NOT own any of the characters mentioned in the book (besides a few random side characters I made up spontaneously). They are all part of Rick Riordan's Percy Jackson franchise. 

do not read this. I wrote this when I was really little and just... no. save yourself before it's too late. 

Highest ranks -

#1 pjohoo 
#1 darkpercy
#23 camphalfblood
#1 Perseus
#6 percyjacksonandtheolympians
#4 pjofandom
All Rights Reserved
Table of contents
Sign up to add 𝔭𝔢𝔯𝔰𝔢𝔲𝔰 to your library and receive updates
or
#3darkpercy
Content Guidelines
You may also like
You may also like
Slide 1 of 10
Commander Alpha cover
ɪ'ʟʟ ꜱᴇᴇ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀɢᴀɪɴ ᴡʜᴇɴ ɪ ᴇꜱᴄᴀᴘᴇ cover
Percy Jackson: Gods' Bane (DARK PERCY) cover
Expect the Unexpected  (A Percy Jackson/Chaos fanfiction) cover
Child of Time cover
Wanted: The Dark Kingdom (Percy Jackson Fanfiction) cover
Wanted (Percy Jackson Fanfiction) (COMPLETED)  cover
Saving Wisdom and Wizards || PJO x HP cover
Half-Magic (DISCONTINUED) cover
Babysitting Hogwarts {Book 1} cover

Commander Alpha

35 parts Complete

Commander Alpha of Chaos's Army (PJO/HOO Fanfic) Highest Ranks: #1 in Percy Jackson; #1 in PJO Percy Jackson. Savior of Olympus. Hero of the century. For a while, he's the most respected demigod out there. But it's surprising how fast things can change. Brendan, another demigod, appears and starts spreading lies about Percy and soon has the whole camp against him, except for Percy's closest friends. But soon, even they begin to have their doubts. In a turn of events, Percy runs from his home and into Chaos, becoming the commander of Chaos's army and the adopted son of Chaos. It's been 500 years, and Percy loves his new home on Chaos's planet. But, when trouble arises on Earth, Percy and his army are forced to face their pasts and Percy has to defend the ones that betrayed him. This story of betrayal, love, the everlasting bond of a family, and forgiveness filled with endless twists and turns will keep you entertained and inspired until the very end. - - - All credit goes to Rick Riordan for PJO and HoO and all of the characters, except the ones that I make up, duh! Hope you enjoy! (If you find any grammatical errors/ spelling errors/ words that just don't fit right, please leave a comment so I can fix it!) I do updates twice a week on Wednesdays and Saturdays. Enjoy!