First Sin (Sin Series Book 1) *First Draft* Editing

First Sin (Sin Series Book 1) *First Draft* Editing

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June Peters feels as though her life is falling apart, with her parents splitting up, she thinks she is losing her best friend, Brooke, and her father constantly falling to pieces. She feels alone, but her dad is trying his best, her mom chose to leave him and he is barely surviving the heart break. So, he is not around to protect her when a strange man threatens to bring the pieces of June's life scattering all around her. She has not seen crazy or trouble till she meets this man. But even with all that, June stops for a minute to think, "it might be worth it." - "A life led without love and catastrophe as a pair, is far better than a perfect life led without love."
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