Malady

A woman by herself in a hospital room. She has just given birth, or so she believes. Her surroundings and the context of her life keep changing until she discovers who she really is, and why she's in hospital. Now she's about to wake up. Perhaps a former commune leader who also happens to be her deranged hippie father will come to rescue her. Maybe she doesn't need rescuing.
This is a scene-by-scene treatment I wrote for a screenplay I'd like to write one day. Some feedback would be nice at this stage. Thank you for reading.