The Suggestion Story
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We start in the dark. Unknown of our surroundings. In moment we react. In another we think. Our voices rise, trying to control the situation. Will your words guide us or will it bring us to our doom.
(Basically, every once and a while I will come read suggestion put in the comments, it can be little as a sensation or as big as in elephant in the room. You decide and the story unfolds. I can't wait to see how this turns out.)
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