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Fallen (Incomplete)

Reads 94
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Parts 7
Time 23m

Reads 94
Votes 9
Parts 7
Time 23m

action captive tourture war

To be decided


However any advice and cristism would be appreciated

This is my first story i have written/writing and going off my thoughts and ideas. I hope to rewrite as i go onwardsAll Rights Reserved

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