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One New Message [Editing]
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    Time 36m
Complete, First published Apr 24, 2014
ME: I am strongly not happy with this story I wrote it a year ago.... and I have edited the first couple of chapters but  I just can't do anymore without changing the entire story and plot line and I really don't think that its worth it.

But if you want to read it,  go ahead.
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I wrote this story when I was in 2011. You can see that I lack writing skills back them. Yes, one chapter has a "love scene" that was actually explicit in the original. Then when the story was released, I deleted that scene and replaced it a new one. Now, I reverted that scene back but it wasn't very detailed unlike the original. I kept the original story and I rather not change it. I did not add anything (although I edited some of the words) on it. I'm also planning to remake this and make it a visual novel (using a visual novel maker). The whole story is based on the anime Kanon.