The Blue Hands
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Sarah Mitchell is just a normal teenage girl living in the south of US. She's 17 years old, lives with her parents, younger sister Lisa and their cat Doodles and everything is just like in every other family. Except this one part. Sarah's life is ordinary by day, but not so much at night. At night while everyone else are asleep, she's out solving crimes, being a secret agent in the secret group The Blue Hands. The strange part? When Sarah wakes up in the mornings, she can't remember what she's been out doing all night and this has been her life since the day she turned 13. But one rainy morning when Sarah wakes up like she always does in her bed with Doodles by her side, everything changes. That morning, she can remember her adventures in the middle of the night, torturing that old man. She wakes up screaming. What did she do last night? Why did she do it? And how could she possibly know how to torture a person?
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