❤Don't Let Me Go❤ (Boyxboy)

The rushing wind hitting my helmet as I ride my motorcycle at lightning speed, not caring for the driving laws. I couldn't stop the tears streaming down my face. The tears on my face made it hard to see, I didn't see the red light. I drove through the intersection, cars driving by, one hit the side of my bike, feeling the tension through my jaw, bringing a striking shock through my body. I flew off my bike. My whole body was in pain. People were freaking out around me, screaming, "someone call 911!" I felt dizzy. I feel like my whole body was being crushed. It was getting harder to see and breathe. At least if I die, I can't see him with another...

Hey guys, this is my first story I'm writing, well my friend and I are writing. It is an LGBTQ+ story. It is about a guy named Grayson who got outed by a trusted friend, then got kicked out of his friend group for being gay. One of his friends Mark left the group because he thought it was unfair that Grayson left for his sexuality. These two will start hanging out together more. They also have a new group they are hanging out with, and the group is kind of like the outcast in school. After awhile, Grayson and Mark get closer, but someone gets in there way of being together, Edward. Will Grayson and Mark be together or is Edward going to steal one of them away. I wonder who ends up with who.
So this is about friendships, hardships, romance, comedy, and school life all in one story. Please give my friend and I some advice or tell me feedback on what should be better about the story, we would really love that. Also, I hope you like the story. Please vote and support.❤
Also names in here may be weird of sound like other people but they are not the same person. We used some names of maybe a K-pop group just because it fit with the characters.