Condemned
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Last published Sat, Aug 11, 2018
condemned [verb]: to express unfavorable or adverse judgment on; forbidden love. ✗❦
In a world adopted by astrology, Blake Rosenthal is separated from her family only at age sixteen, being moved into her Pisces faction to later prosper into adulthood. The Government strives for conformity and balance with the twelve factions of the Zodiac. While adapting to this change, Blake finds herself meeting someone along the way that isn't as they seem, and with her heart on her sleeve, her life will take a dangerous turn, for better or for worse.
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