Before The Black Hole
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Last published Sun, Dec 30, 2018
(The old the synopsis was for the general series, but the synopsis for this particular story is below)
The year is 2288, and Dakota Ripley, the town's 'freak', has finally been accepted in the Space Sojourn Academy or the SSA. Dakota is the son of the famous Sayer Ripley. Sayer, one day went out in space in 2199, and then returned 76 years later not only to find that he had not aged a day but also had a newborn son. Dakota. Dakota's personality let alone his appearance is a little different than most people.
But so is Puckall Archway, or Puck. Puck has also been ridiculed for not being able to hear, and not being able to fix it with cybernetics because of his family's financial problems. Puck went to the same school as Dakota before he was also accepted into the SSA and has been know to be kind of a trouble maker.
Puck wants to be able to do what he loves and explore the unknown, while Dakota just wants to find where he truly belongs. What happens when the two boys become roommates and cause absolute chaos during the Acceptance Ceremony.
*I am not someone who writes author notes at the end or beginning of chapters, so I most likely won't have one at all.*
**I did change the title since its the before story to "Before the Black Hole" from "All It Took Was a Black Hole" but that (all it took was a black hole) will be the sequel's title.**
***I also do a lot of editing instead of actually adding more, but I do tend to get writer's block a lot so enjoy what you can***
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