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My Immortal (But It's Slightly Better)

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Hi and welcome to My Immortal But It's Slightly Better! I'm here to rewrite My Immortal to read more like, you know, a legitimate book or fanfiction while keeping all the dumb and cringey elements as present as possible.

Things  that could change or be added : Ebony's many outfits, scenes, extra dialogue or even chapters to add coherency, the numerous spelling and grammatical mistakes, anything that stops My Immortal from becoming the literary masterpiece it obviously longs to be.

Things that will absolutely not change: the plot, characterisation, etc.

(AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me fangz!)All Rights Reserved

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The Ashes of Ebony by musical_riley

Ebony Tonks grew up with her sister, Nymphadora Tonks, but inside she always wished she had an older brother. "The protective type of brother." She would think sometimes. Well, when Ebony's mum and dad finally let her go to Hogwarts, instead of being homeschooled like she ahd been in past years, Ebony is brought into a differnet life than she is used to. Of course at first she was worried about making friends, but with her cheery personality she made friends right off the bat. But after she gets sorted, will they still want to be her friends? And she gets some big news on her birthday. AAnd what happens when someone confesses their undeying love for her.....and then she finds out the truth. Follow Ebony as she tries to adapt to life in a big school and deal with the rise of Voldemort at the same time. Theme song: Everybody's Fool by Evanescence

Book 1: Of Thorns & Roses by simpleindulgence

*EDITING RN* There's something achingly beautiful about Draco Malfoy. When Grier Langston first arrives at Hogwarts for her 6th year of magical education, she is catapulted into a world of endless mysteries and harmful delights. This is nothing like Ilvermorny. She is soon drawn to fellow student Draco Malfoy, for his sharp tongue and crude remarks can't seem to deter her. His ice gray eyes captivate her like no one ever has. After a string of attacks and mysterious interactions within the walls of her new home, Grier and Draco must uncover the startling truth and continue their life as it once was. But can they handle the truth or will it destroy them? ------------- "We were tangled between the sheets. A tangible mess of sweat and ecstasy. I had never felt so undeniably calm, yet empowered all the same. My body felt like a temple, in which he was the only one to enter. I looked up at his gleaming face, for a picture couldn't do him justice." ~ Warning: contains mature content (smut), strong language, & violence - 18+ - Cover by the AMAZING @floricidelove

Mine, Yours and Us - Currently under rewrite by sweet_summer_nights

GUYS!! This fic is currently having a rewrite. It was my first fic and I feel like I can do so much better. So if you have it in your reading list please wait until I have done the rewrite. I promise it'll be worth it. For those of you that have already read it all I want to say is thank you. Kingsley moved out the way and I saw exactly who he was talking too. I took him all in. Black shoes and trousers, his body was buff and he wore a white shirt with a black waistcoat and jacket. His hands were massive and he sported a serpent ring, his jaw was tight and his piercing grey eyes were framed by blond hair. Holy shit it was Draco Malfoy. "Hermione you remember Draco he's our new head of magical sports." "Hello Hermione long time no see." Oh merlins beard." He'd always wanted her. She'd never known. Could the Slytherin Prince finally get the Gryffindor Princess? *PLEASE TAKE NOTE* In this story is cheating, attempted murder, sexual assault, a lot of smut and adult themes. You have been warned. I do not own any of the characters they are all JKR A spicy Dramione Fanfiction for ages 18+ 14.02.21/29.03.21 No. 1 for dramionefanfiction! 29.03.21 No. 5 for dramione

Reading Between the Lines ~ Dramione by cvnt_s3rver

WARNING!! I DO NOT OWN ANYTHING!! NOT EVEN THE PLOT OR STORY!! CHARACTERS AND SETTING ALL BELONGS TO J.K. ROWLING! PLOT AND STORY AND WRITING ALL BELONGS TO LADYTARTAN ON harrypotterfanfiction.com! I JUST THOUGHT THAT THIS IS SUCH AN AMAZING STORY AND THAT I SHOULD PUT IT ON A DIFFERENT PLATFORM. I WANTED MORE PEOPLE TO ENJOY SUCH A GOOD STORY. THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE DRAMIONE FANFICS. ENJOY! *NOTE- LADYTARTAN HAS NOT UPDATED THIS STORY SINCE ABT 9 YEARS! EVEN I AM WAITING FOR A NEW CHAPTER AND HOPING THEY WILL UPDATE. Hermione decides to return to school for her 8th year at Hogwarts where she randomly keeps bumping into a certain blonde. Every time they bump into each other, they have an exchange of book quotes.. but not just any book quotes, muggle book quotes. Hermione is intrigued by the fact that THE Draco Malfoy knows muggle book quotes. Starting like that the two find out that both of them are hiding behind the same books away from other people. As their interactions increase the two find themselves getting closer and closer to each other. But then enters DRAMA! (formerly) #3 in Dramione

𝙈𝙮 𝙁𝙧𝙚𝙣𝙘𝙝 𝙂𝙞𝙧𝙡 by EmilyCoffin606

The story is describing the erotic love life of a French pure Blood Emanuelle Daaé, who falls in love with Draco Malfoy after their many night hook-ups. Some of Elle's body features, thinking, pursuits, etc. are my own. There is some true data about my life. :) There will be a lot of smut but also a lot of romance, some other characters will join during the story. There won't be any warnings at the start of the chapters cause I already said that there will be smut (in all the chapters, at least two times in one) The pills she's taking are magical and are for after sex, so she just takes the pill after sex and she won't get pregnant. They get together pretty fast and I fucked the story uppp! But pls consider it as love on the first sigh... yk... Anything can happen in books. Forget the fact that they're 15 because the way they act is way too mature for that age and what they do is really not appropriate but since I've already written the whole book and can't change it so deal with it. I do not support having that kind of sex at 15 just so you know :) Time: 1994-post the second wizarding war (i can assure you that there will be a lot of mature content and language, so be prepared😼) Love, Em❤️

My immortal (but I fixed the grammar) by Ch4rliehe11

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Nobody Told Me I Was Alone by Batoruenjeru23

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Drarry a siren story by Gryffinpuffgirl_2310

This is a creatur story!!! ❤️❤️ Draco is a siren, he has known his whole life! What happens when he comes into his inheritance and has to find his mate? Harry is a wizard who lives with Sirius his godfather, he won the worst wizard (Voldemort) when just one years old! Harry and Draco are both going to their seventh year in the beginning of the story! ❤️❤️ So I have dyslexia and English isn't my first language so please don't mind the grammar mistakes...? I do appreciate criticism just not when people are mean about it! ❤️❤️ ⚠️shoutout's⚠️ • Alek.dar on Instagram for making the Cover Photo • Obsessedteen_16 on Instagram for giving me support • _.•*Radou Shou*•._ on Instagram for giving me support ❤️❤️ ⚠️there will be mention of⚠️ • Drarry (of course) • lot of fluff • maybe smut (there will be a warning before it so you can skip it) • creature inherence • Draco's top • Harry's bottom • accepting Lucius and Narcissa • Wolfstar (Remus and Sirius) • male pregnancy ⚠️This list might get longer as the story progresses⚠️

𝚂𝚎𝚌𝚛𝚎𝚝𝚜 & 𝙻𝚒𝚎𝚜 ||𝙳.𝙼 𝙵𝚊𝚗𝚏𝚒𝚌|| by thethinkingpen

He pushes me against one of the book shelves and I am glad that all students and Madam Pince have left. His lips trail to my neck, "Let me be honest, that mark above your breast, turns me on so much" he says biting the flesh of my breast. "Oh, and I am never that drunk to not know when a girl slaps me" His hand grabs around my neck as he lays me down, "That was quite a swing, princess" He's talking about how I slapped him when he got drunk after that match when him and I were in an argument. "Get over my knee" he orders adjusting his pants as he man-spreads on the chair. His lap teasing me to get over it for a night of my life. "What?" I blink innocently, "Over my knee. Now" I get over his knee without another question, because Draco Malfoy does not ask twice. Olivia was never just an ordinary girl. Muggle-born-or so she's told-she joins Hogwarts in her first year and quickly discovers that her powers go far beyond what any young witch should possess. As Olivia uncovers chilling secrets about her past, she finds herself drawn into the fight alongside the Golden Trio against the rising dark forces. But when her path collides with Draco Malfoy-her sworn rival turned reluctant ally-everything changes. Love sparks in the shadows, truths unravel, and Olivia is forced to confront the darkest secret of all... the one hidden inside herself. Power. Legacy. And a love that could destroy or save them both. All the copyrights and characters are owned by J.K. Rowling, except for the ones that I will create, which will be easy to identify. The general story idea is similar to HP movies, but with my own fanfiction spiciness. My story happens around this time, well not actually 2020s but not in 1900s too. So hope you enjoy a little magic, love and pain with modern tech! And a little warning - MATURE CONTENT. Contains harsh language, knife work, smut and fluff.

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My immortal (but I fixed the grammar) cover

Nobody Told Me I Was Alone cover

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The Ashes of Ebony

Ebony Tonks grew up with her sister, Nymphadora Tonks, but inside she always wished she had an older brother. "The protective type of brother." She would think sometimes. Well, when Ebony's mum and dad finally let her go to Hogwarts, instead of being homeschooled like she ahd been in past years, Ebony is brought into a differnet life than she is used to. Of course at first she was worried about making friends, but with her cheery personality she made friends right off the bat. But after she gets sorted, will they still want to be her friends? And she gets some big news on her birthday. AAnd what happens when someone confesses their undeying love for her.....and then she finds out the truth. Follow Ebony as she tries to adapt to life in a big school and deal with the rise of Voldemort at the same time. Theme song: Everybody's Fool by Evanescence