Innocent Gale Beta

The Twilight Union, an intergalactic space force that governs the cosmos. It was formed around 100 years ago during the First Great Intergalactic War as the opposing army. Ending up victorious against the Dusk Order Empire, they became the leading force in space. Over the following years, numerous factions including the former Dusk Order became more apparent and reduced the Twilight Union to a simple police force. However with the creation of artificial mana users 20 years ago, the Twilight Union was able to regain some of its former glory, growing into a sustainable intergalactic peace keeping force whose main objectives were to protect underdeveloped planets and allow the inhabitants to keep their natural course.

One day while patrolling Sector F-41 of the galaxy, Burster falls under enemy fire. As he desperately clings to life, a sudden explosion sends him adrift to an alien planet where he encounters a weird native by the name El'léon, or Léo for short. What awaits the two as they traverse the cosmos as fully fledged members of the Twilight Union? (Beta version)

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