Goodbye
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Last published Thu, Aug 16, 2018
My brother left me in Abnegation. That's when things got bad.
I'm Ariana Eaton. Daughter of Abnegations leader Marcus. I'm leaving home today. I'm choosing my new faction. I will see my brother again.
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