To Catch a Pirate. (A FanFic Continuation of the Book)

To Catch A Pirate is a book by Jade Parker. It is one of my favorites, But I felt as if the story ended on a cliffhanger if you will. I felt as if there was much of the story that had yet to be told. And I have imagained for years, the variations of the way the book might have continued. But it never crossed my mind to write out my continuation.
This is a Fan Fic, my first one, Please feel free to give and advice and Critique my writing.
This will be a continuing story, this is just the first bit.