Thicker than Water

Lauren and Josh are drawn to each other, unexplainably. All they want is to be together, however, they must keep their feelings for each other a secret. Will they be able to resist each other forever?

"Lauren sometimes wonders, 'If I had known then what I know now, would I still have gone on that drive with him?' She hopes the answer is yes."

PS. I am not a "real writer" but CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is appreciated!