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Changbin Oneshot
Changbin bottom oneshots. Many mistakes+mispells, please forgive me. Chapters may look similar to other writers so full creds to them.Kumpleto
|Feelings...|Aizawa x Reader|
REPOSTING THIS UNTIL I EDIT IT Sorry if it's not good, it's my first time writing a story. You enroll at UA and you have multiple quirks you are really good at using, you've worked really hard to get to UA, you also have a job at the club and you live on your own. I'm not redoing my book, I'm working on a different one. I might renovated it because it was written years ago.Kumpleto
HIS REGRET
A relationship without trust is never strong.. He doesn't trust her and even cheats on her, she knew all of that but that doesn't stop her love for him that she even blame herself for his shameful actions. She tried hard to match up his standard to please him, but her dedication were never recognize by him... a saying goes 'you never know what you have until you lose it' and that is the exact thing that happens here, he kept on ignoring his diamond(her) again and again but little did he know that she also is only a mere human, whose feelings have limits to how much they can endure his indifferences. Read the story to see what a cracked up relationship experience that poor Sena had to faced throughout her life journey. Total words count 21914 + 952(bonus chapter)😘😘😊Kumpleto
Kaiju Paradise Random Stuff
I'm lazy, DESC. Gootraxian and a human's life while in the Facility. https://perchance.org/incorrect-quote-generator /\ | Thats the incorrect quote generator I used :) I DO NOT OWN ANYTHING IN KAIJU PARADISE. Cover art made by me in Paint 3d. It's an OC. I'm making a book for random Kaiju Paradise AUs I made up at 3am while trying to sleep. UPDATE: -Now there will be an interactable book mainly, with some l o r e. NO SEQUEL LOLKumpleto
Sold to My Bestfriend's Brother ( Completed)
" How dare you dance with that man? How dare you?"The man asked the girl angrily, pinning her against a wall, holding her arms tightly. His fingers were dug into her arms, leaving bruises. " I was just ...", the girl said timidly. She was shivering seeing his anger filled eyes. " What?? Have you forgotten your truth??"He asked her, pulling her closer to himself. The girl was trembling badly due to his dominating aura. Her eyes were fixed on his chest, not daring to look in his eyes. No one dared to look at him directly,then how can she, a normal girl, have the courage to look at him. He holds her neck from back and makes her look into his eyes. " If you have forgotten then let me remind you.....I have bought you .... Your soul, your heart, your body, your breath, your everything belongs to me and only me ... .And you let that bastard touch something which belongs to me ... .How dare you???"He asked her angrily. " I...", the girl tried to explain herself but didn't have the courage to utter a single word in the presence of his dominating aura. " You need a lesson so you never forget who you belong to", he said angrily, before smashing his lips on hers, kissing her roughly, punishing her.Kumpleto
A LOVE SONG UNSUNG
He was 23, and she was 18. They stood together in the registry office, ready to sign the papers that would officially make them husband and wife. It was a secret marriage-only his friend and his girlfriend knew about it. He signed first, then handed her the pen with a smile, but her heart raced as doubt and insecurity clouded her thoughts. Was this the right decision? What if his father found out about the marriage? Would his family accept an orphan and a maid like her as a daughter-in-law? What if, after fulfilling his desires, he grew tired of her and abandoned her? She had no one to stand up for her, no one to turn to if things went wrong. Was it true love, or was he simply lusting after her? Why would a billionaire's son want her? He could have anyone-maybe even a movie star-but he chose her. Why? Despite her fears, her love for him was genuine. Slowly, she lifted her gaze to meet his, her insecurities weighing heavy on her heart. He took her hand in his, offering a gentle squeeze, then motioned for her to sign the papers. With a quiet nod, she did. His friends clapped and congratulated the couple, each one signing as a witness on the papers. Now, legally, they were husband and wife. But to the outside world, she was nothing more than a maid in his house.
The rambling of a writer
[Me, complaining and contradicting all and everything written in every fanfiction created.] No hate, Just me, rambling about different topics in Fanfiction writing. Why? Because we all start somewhere, am I right? The good, the bad, the rightout clichès and the straight up delulu stuff. Note that I probably did most -if not all- of these things myself when writing, so be prepared of your beautiful cringefest and maybe learn a thing or two about writing a plot/story. Side note: Writing is a creative process, so... no shame in making any mistakes! We all have to start from somewhere! Side side note: Most of the things I talk about come either from my personal opinion OR from the things I've learned over the years. I've been writing since age ten and even did a Minor in creative writing whilst studying for my degree. Last side side side note: The fun is to read these chapters and then visit a random story on wattpadd. I guarentee you, you'll either groan in annoyance ance you can see these things or you giggle at how predictable things will get once you know some writer mistakes. It's all fun and it educates all of us! -xXx-
KarEena One Shots
Just some thoughts and imaginations roaming in my mind which I tried to write as OS or TS. I'm not any professional writer. Just writing for my own satisfaction. Feel free to convey your thoughts and suggestions to improve my writing.Kumpleto
Changbin bottom oneshots. Many mistakes+mispells, please forgive me. Chapters may look similar to other writers so full creds to them.
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