Just An Angel Editorial

(So I wrote this story a long time ago but I was recently going through some of my old stories. And before you ask, I'm not rewriting this ((probably)) I'm going through and making notes of all the weird or bad things about this. Little annotations as if I were going to fix stuff. Enjoy)

Jax has a bad life. His stepmom beats him and his dad is always at work and never pays much attention to him or his sisters and step brother. He is constantly bullied physically and emotionally at school. His mother has been dead for a while yet he still is sad. That is until a certain angel and her elemental pet come into his life.
But when demons start invading earth they go for Jax. After all he can see his guardian angel, unless they are in human form it is impossible to see them. They want to know the source of this and won't stop the attacks on humans until they get him and use him to take over the colorful planet. Jax, his angel and her pet as well as his friends are the only ones who can save earth. But how? And will it cost them their lives?