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𝐓𝐬𝐮𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐚𝐠𝐚 𝐒𝐚𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐮 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐚 𝐛𝐨𝐲, 𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐮𝐠𝐞𝐝 𝐛𝐲 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐦𝐚𝐬𝐬𝐚𝐜𝐫𝐞 𝐨𝐟 𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐜𝐥𝐚𝐧. 𝐇𝐞 𝐬𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐝𝐨 𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐲𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐢𝐧 𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐩𝐨𝐰𝐞𝐫 𝐭𝐨 𝐚𝐯𝐞𝐧𝐠𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐦, 𝐧𝐨 𝐦𝐚𝐭𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐰𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐢𝐭 𝐭𝐨𝐨𝐤. __________________________________________ 𝐀𝐟𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐒𝐚𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐮 𝐠𝐨𝐭 𝐚𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐠𝐧𝐞𝐝 𝐭𝐨 𝐓𝐞𝐚𝐦 𝟕, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐠𝐨𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐤𝐧𝐨𝐰 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐦, 𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐩𝐞𝐫𝐬𝐩𝐞𝐜𝐭𝐢𝐯𝐞 𝐨𝐧 𝐥𝐢𝐟𝐞 𝐜𝐡𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐝. 𝐇𝐞 𝐟𝐢𝐧𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐜𝐚𝐮𝐠𝐡𝐭 𝐚 𝐠𝐥𝐢𝐦𝐩𝐬𝐞 𝐨𝐟 𝐨𝐧𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐡𝐞 𝐭𝐫𝐮𝐥𝐲 𝐝𝐞𝐬𝐢𝐫𝐞𝐝, 𝐚 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐥 𝐟𝐚𝐦𝐢𝐥𝐲. 𝐇𝐞 𝐟𝐢𝐧𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐤𝐧𝐞𝐰 𝐰𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐢𝐭 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐡𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐥 𝐟𝐫𝐢𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐬, 𝐭𝐨 𝐟𝐞𝐞𝐥 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐥 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝 𝐝𝐨 𝐚𝐧𝐲𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐭𝐨 𝐩𝐫𝐨𝐭𝐞𝐜𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐬𝐞 𝐟𝐞𝐞𝐥𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬... __________________________________________ 𝐒𝐚𝐬𝐮𝐤𝐞𝐱𝐎𝐜 𝐎𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐩𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐛𝐞 𝐝𝐞𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐦𝐢𝐧𝐞𝐝 𝐈 𝐝𝐨 𝐧𝐨𝐭 𝐨𝐰𝐧 𝐍𝐚𝐫𝐮𝐭𝐨. 𝐈 𝐨𝐧𝐥𝐲 𝐨𝐰𝐧 𝐦𝐲 𝐨𝐜𝐬. 𝐍𝐚𝐫𝐮𝐭𝐨 𝐛𝐞𝐥𝐨𝐧𝐠𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐌𝐚𝐬𝐚𝐬𝐡𝐢 𝐊𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐦𝐨𝐭𝐨![Naruto: God of Shinobi [Rebellion Against Existence, Vol. 1] (Hiatus)](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/336874754-256-k761223.jpg)
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