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What if Luna failed to save Anakin from himself?
This is a little "What if" that got a bit too carried away and became its own story. I would suggest reading A Long Time Ago, In a Galaxy Far Away to understand what is happening and what has happened, but it's up to you. There will be a summery below for you, if you don't want to read it.
Long story short, Galaxy tells you the gist of what happened before the start of the story (Of course it is slightly different to CAUSE the alternate ending). You get to know more about Luna's personality and character, but if you want to jump right into it, by all means.
If you are here from Galaxy, you can see her alternate story.
Summery for those who are skipping Galaxy is here:
Many things happened during the fall of the Republic. Many died, many disappeared, many were never seen again. Luna was one of the second.
Born and raised on Earth, she had been taken from her home planet by none other than Anakin Skywalker, Obi-Wan Kenobi, and Padmé Amidala. She came with them to both escape her past, not that they were aware of what she was running from, and to try to save their world, having been a devoted fan of Star Wars since childhood.
She fails and is captured by non other than Palpatine. He experiments on her, eventually succeeding in making her Force sensitive. He then freezes her in carbonite after giving her a serum that would take away her memories, planning to unfreeze her when the time came to replace his right hand.
Darth Vader has other ideas.
This is the rise of Vader's Shadow
This is the rise of Eclipse.
I only own the characters I have created, all rights of Star Wars go to Disney and LucasFilm.
This story is currently on hiatus.
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