Fallen Petals
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"I'm a true hero now. It's my duty to free these humanoid slaves."
Rose was an ordinary teenage Roseling until she was mutated by an enemy kingdom. Killslinger crosses a line when he enslaves an entire population. Rose, Fennec, & Dale must be strong if they are to endure the challenges together & free the slaves. Can they do it?
Reminder: This is an early first draft of the book. I will happily take any suggestions or constructive criticism you have for future rewrites.
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