The Ascendants: A New Era (running title)

The Ascendants: A New Era (running title)

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The Ascendants is a fantasy-based storyline set on the island of Tyradel, inhabited by united kingdoms set on protecting their land from foes who pose a threat to its citizens. The first chapter sets up the story by introducing a mysterious and powerful villain who possesses powers no man has seen before, as "the man in black" and his army attack the City of Gold and take their first victims in what will soon be a long and enduring war for life itself. (Description will be changed with the released of each chapter for the sake of avoiding spoilers) *this is a rough draft of a book that I am writing so I am looking for as much constructive criticism (good and bad)as possible! I have more chapters completed, but I want to release this one first to focus on one chapter at a time.* **every portion of this book is subject to change based around opinions and new ideas of where the story should go. If something significant changes in an already-published chapter, Ill announce if on my feed!**
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A new take on the first novel of the Anti-Hero story line, with updated and polished writing. Expanding and rewriting the story along with adding never before scenes and characterizations with most of the original story beats along the way. This is not the official canon novel, however I'd like to think of it as an alternative universe. You might recognize some things, and see new ones as well. This is also a test for the audience to see how my writing has improved over the years. See which one does best. This is a demo, and will only be up to eight chapters before the main plot of the story unfolds. So if this gets enough traction and if people like this version more, then I'll continue writing it and make this one the canon version instead. (This would also make it a rewrite for Secrets of Demise)

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