Jacob's Ladder

Jacob's Ladder

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Hi! This is just a story I entered into my school 500 words writing competition at Easter 2014. I hope you enjoy reading this tiny little one. If you are wondering why it's Jacob's ladder, that's what these gigantic ladders are called at adventure places like PGL. Since I heard ladders been called that, I always call ladders going on into the sky forever. This story was actually inspired by one of my mum's stories she wrote in school when she was young. The reason she told me this story was because I sometimes tend to plan too much for creative writing in English exams. She told me that only at the end of writing the story that inspired this one was when she decided if the boy was going to die or not. The guilt becomes too much for Jacob after he loses it and punches his brother. A perfect victim for the ladder. Hi guys!!! Just thought I might continue this story a little bit with Jason's point of view a few years later.
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The Golden 30 Last Seconds "0 minutes and 59 seconds." I say out loud. They all look at me, confused. "That's how long I have before they come. I'm sorry I didn't ell you earlier, Brook and Blake." I look at Jason who has sadness, disbelief, despair, guilt, and loneliness mixed in one on his face. I tilt my head at him. Why does he feel guilty? It's not his fault that thy are here. It's mine. But why is he angry? "Jason did you tell Brook?" He shakes his head, not meeting my gaze. I sigh. "Please tell Blake and Brook While I'm Gone." Jason's eyes snap up to mine. "Gone? Where are you going? Aren't you coming back?" He says with panic in his voice. I look at my friends one by one. "Thirty seconds." I whisper to my best friends a moment before I teleport out of the space ship.

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