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CRITICAS CONSTRUCTIVAS

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Reads 436
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Parts 16
Time 27m

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Este apartado tiene por objetivo unico "AYUDAR" ¿Como? a travez de una simple critica constructiva, ya que en mi consideracion es la mejor manera de progresar en este pasatiempo o trabajo como escritor.
-ACLARO: "No me creo dueño de la verdad absoluta"
-PERO SI PUEDO : "Brindar un pequeño tiempo y mucha atencion para sus incertidumbres, dudas y necesidades"-
"AQUI ESTOY, PARA USTEDES"
GRACIAS.All Rights Reserved

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I'm Your Man (Mashle x Fem!Gojo!Reader) by Kealani247

"You're an angel, I'm a dog Or you're a dog and I'm your man You believed me like a God I destroy you like I am" . . . Congratulations, you won the lottery. A lottery to what? You weren't exactly sure what it entails, but this "God" had told you that of the millions of people on earth, YOU, were chosen. You were chosen to go venture into unknown lands, meet new people, and most importantly... ...destroy anomalies. You were granted any power, any ability of your choosing. You just had to do your job. Those were the only conditions. It sounded fairly easy. It IS easy. It was supposed to be easy. So why are there people trying to get in the way of your job's completion? Why did the difficulty of your quest go up? What a pain. . . . "People always gave me love Others were never to blame after all You believed me like a God I betray you like a man" WARNINGS: *Swearing/profanities *yandere themes *gore(?) maybe idk *violence *Mature implications(?) Song: I'm Your Man Artist: Mitski ~Book 1 of "The Paradoxical Deal" series~ Gojo fanart cover credit: Patrika on Alpha Coders

You tell me... my cat is a Vigilante?! by Chimera_Regarion

Mew! Not only a cat but also a vigilante! Good luck finding this guy! Izuku Midoriya was used to staying as a cat soo much that he even preferred being one. Then again, what can be more exciting for a cat then do some kind of exercise? Good that he only wanted to be a vigilante and nothing more. However what will this sweet catboy who usually would be a cat over day and a cat-boy vigilante over nigh do when he is suddenly picked up by a certain hero. MEW! This is bound to be a disaster! A/N: Thanks for all the support, this is the 8k special! Please enjoy! This is a mha fanstory hope you enjoy! Please also feel free to correct my bad writing. Rights on the pictures go to the artist. I do not own mha, rights to the owner.

𝗘𝗣𝗛𝗘𝗠𝗘𝗥𝗔𝗟 | ☆ TBHK/JSHK x READER by v1naw1na

ＥＰＨＥＭＥＲＡＬ _____________________ TBHK/JSHK [ VARIOUS x GN. READER ] EPHEMERAL: „ meaning something that is short lived, such as a lifespan of a living creature or a period of time, like a summer. anything not permanent, or in more poetic words, "everything is temporary". - Raised by a family full of exorcists, (SURNAME) (FORENAME) had grown to know all about supernaturals and apparitions. They grew self aware that there are those who lurk the earth looking like anything besides your average being, people who have the ability to do what the norm cannot, people who others believe should be removed. Those people being exorcists, something they should become. But what if they didn't want to grow up and follow in their bloodline like their sibling had? What if they wanted to live a normal life without the unique vision of seeing what the average citizen cannot? What if they cared not to be dragged into a life involving inhumane beings, and just studied for a job they yearned for, for the rest of their life? Unfortunately, wants cannot always be haves, for this young student at Kamome Gakuen cannot escape the life of a person with seeing eyes. It all started with a school mystery, his assistant, an exorcist, and somebody who wanted nothing to do with the apparition life in the first place. A shame none of them could get what they want. Time is just far too short to let it happen. - - - PUBLISHED ; nov 23 2024 COMPLETED ; n/a STATUS ; ongoing - - - All rights go to the respective owners of the creators of Tbhk/Jshk. - Do not take heavy inspiration. Simple inspiration is fine, but taking my whole plot and character idea is beyond my comfort. Thanks for reading!

SHUNOGAI ( ARCHIVED ) by 51firr

This is the archived version of Shunogai, still ongoing but not top priority. There are no chosen ones. No destined saviors. Only survivors of a system that collapsed and kept pretending it worked. In a universe torn apart by the Void, fragments of reality remain- stitched together by desperate gods, rewritten laws, and broken people. Shukan Ashikaga is one of them. Framed for the death of his family. Haunted by power he doesn't understand. Once bonded to Chronos, a Shunogai who chose law over loyalty, Shukan now walks with the shadow of a power that no longer chooses him. Now he leads a squad of outcasts through timelines that shouldn't exist, hunted by things that don't follow cause and effect. But something deeper is waking. Something older than the Void. Something that watches every step like a reader already halfway through the book. The rules are changing. The glyphs are whispering. And Shukan may not be a protagonist. He might be the reason it all ends. ✦ SHUNOGAI ✦ Rewrite the law. Break the fate. Burn the timeline.

Glint and Precurse by interestingy

Have you ever gotten the feeling that everything you do is for nothing? Do you feel that no matter how hard you try, the world will always move on without you, whether you like it or not? Is it difficult to keep up in this current of events everyone else calls existence? Yeah... me neither... What? Do I have to put a meaningful and insightful description of the story? This is MY story, and I can do whatever the hell I want! It's funny how people just expect me to do things for them... Oh, you still aren't satisfied? If you are spending so much time reading this meaningless book description, why haven't you already started reading it? This is the kind of thing that bothers me about readers! They want people like me to practically spoil the entire story for them before they read it! Now, what it the point in that? So, taking into consideration the previous message, if you are still dying to get a taste of what this story revolves around, I might as well tell you. You have been oh-so-patient by reading all of this jibber-jabber that it would only be disrespectful for me not to give you a little information! Well... looks like I am just a really disrespectful person.

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Hero of Resilience: Halo by TheHinokami

Join us as we explore the story of what if Izuku Midoriya was expelled on the day of the quirk apprehension test that Eraserhead conducted on the first day of class? What if instead of All Might getting Nezu to override the decision, he decides to send Izuku Midoriya to another hero school by pulling a favor with the school? What if Izuku's training underwent a complete overhaul due to the staff at the new school learning of him only having it for a short period of time? What if they learned of him being discriminated against and help him gain confidence in himself instead of leaving him to his own devices as Eraserhead did in the canon? Well, we can see what happens in those what-ifs through this story. As such, join us as we follow Izuku Midoriya's journey as he becomes the Hero of Resilience: Halo. *No images are mine* *Unkown if I will do a ship*

Digit (A Mina Ashido X Male Reader Fanfic) by Dhruv_M1702

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