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CRITICAS CONSTRUCTIVAS

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Parts 16
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Este apartado tiene por objetivo unico "AYUDAR" ¿Como? a travez de una simple critica constructiva, ya que en mi consideracion es la mejor manera de progresar en este pasatiempo o trabajo como escritor.
-ACLARO: "No me creo dueño de la verdad absoluta"
-PERO SI PUEDO : "Brindar un pequeño tiempo y mucha atencion para sus incertidumbres, dudas y necesidades"-
"AQUI ESTOY, PARA USTEDES"
GRACIAS.All Rights Reserved

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the new Ironman by WolfSama8

"you can't, you can't, you can't " izuku has heard that every single day from everyone, from his classmates, to his former friend, to his teachers, from even his own mother. but all of them are gonna learn something, the definition of the human spirit, and our absolute spitefulness when people tell us we can't. izuku midoriya is gonna make the can't into a can

Glint and Precurse by interestingy

Have you ever gotten the feeling that everything you do is for nothing? Do you feel that no matter how hard you try, the world will always move on without you, whether you like it or not? Is it difficult to keep up in this current of events everyone else calls existence? Yeah... me neither... What? Do I have to put a meaningful and insightful description of the story? This is MY story, and I can do whatever the hell I want! It's funny how people just expect me to do things for them... Oh, you still aren't satisfied? If you are spending so much time reading this meaningless book description, why haven't you already started reading it? This is the kind of thing that bothers me about readers! They want people like me to practically spoil the entire story for them before they read it! Now, what it the point in that? So, taking into consideration the previous message, if you are still dying to get a taste of what this story revolves around, I might as well tell you. You have been oh-so-patient by reading all of this jibber-jabber that it would only be disrespectful for me not to give you a little information! Well... looks like I am just a really disrespectful person.

Mha: The Batman by losghost-10

Izuku will be part of a test of sorts that he and Nezu come up with, the main idea is how well can a non quirked individual do in a hero work environment, the secondary idea was how the students working as heroes would interact with a vigilante in their test. (⚠️ Disclaimer ⚠️ : I don't own any concepts, characters, ideas, art or music.)

𝐂𝐔𝐑𝐀𝐓𝐈𝐕𝐄 | bnha by heart-forecast

National UA high school is the most recognised school for producing heroes. For a long time, they had just four departments; the hero course, the general education course, the support course and the business course. What if they decided to add a medical course for the students aiming to become doctors? After years of persuasion, Recovery Girl has finally agreed on taking a class herself. But as she is nearing the age of retirement, she has conditions; she'll only be taking three students. Y/N has wanted to become a doctor all her life. When she hears the news, she is adamant on getting in. She simply cannot give up the perks and opportunities that'll come with enrolling in UA. It just happens to be that a stoic, anti-social boy in her class is also aiming for the same school. As their paths mingle, their fates start to intertwine. Can the two teenagers simultaneously attain love and dreams? Or will they have to give up on one of them? *** A bnha fanfiction Shoto Todoroki x Reader (fem)

Love Geometry - Camilo x Reader x Mirabel [COMPLETE] by YourMamaLee

"You... saved my life." Tiles lunge me forward and I put my hands out to brace myself. My hand ends up on the handle and the door explodes with light. ------------------------------------ I got telekinesis the night of Mirabel's ceremony. ------------------------------------ I open both the notes. I scan them over, taking a bit longer to read Mirabel's cursive than Camilo's messy handwriting. Both of them are professing their love for me. ------------------------------------ "I wish I coulda helped more." "Then have another vision!" ------------------------------------ "Happy new year! And happy sweet sixteen to our three sweet angels." -- "I get parties are a hassle, especially with so many people, but they treat us like one person." "This is bullshit. Let's go actually celebrate our birthdays." -- "Let's get fucked up!" ------------------------------------ "What the fuck happened last night?" ------------------------------------ "This is your fault! First you stole Mirabel's gift and now you're taking my perfect family off the rails!" "Maybe I'll just leave if I'm so terrible, then!" A crack goes down the center of the house. #497 encanto tag 1/26/22 #273 camilo tag 1/27/22 #361 disney tag 2/9/22 #28 casita tag 3/21/22

The Ger Is A Part Timer [BL] by Star_Bem

A/N: Had a bout of inspiration; may edit and then republish some time later after finishing writing another story, since I'm more focused on my other book -- [BL] Videre -- at the moment. Nonetheless, cheers to good reading and writing~ I'll brew this story first. I wanted some sweet and fluff in contrast to my other work. Book cover is atrocious btw, I know, lolol. I'll change that when I'm more focused on it. Just ignore like I do. Hehe~ _+_+_ Yu Yan is a curious little thing. Bridal classes? Easy. Archery? Swordsmanship? Martial arts? Horseback riding? Are kidding him? His father is a General! Unfortunately, Yu Yan had to marry the Emperor when his father, the mighty General, had died. With the pernicious palace life suffocating him, he had unexpectedly died before he could successfully run away. Hm? But what's this? It isn't the end? He's not dead yet? God: Hello, transmigrator~ Congratulations for successfully passing the screening of becoming a Heaven's part-timer! You have been chosen among a million of your peers and will be given a chance to reincarnate a different world of your choosing. We guarantee lots of benefits~ Of course, you can also decline and reincarnate back at your old world. Now then, what will you decide? Yu Yan: Can I be a doctor at that new world? God: Of course, of course! Whatever you want, you can be as long as you can protect, monitor, and stimulate the son and daughter of that world~ Yu Yan: Can I retain my memories? God: Anything you want! We can even retain your own body and just insert you into the world's trajectory. Now, please choose which book or world trajectory you want to work on~ Yu Yan after he transmigrated into the book: ....This isn't what I signed up for. Prince Gazef: I'll let you be my private doctor. I'll provide anything and everything you need and want. I'll be your sugar daddy if you want. Yu Yan: ...Alright, I'll stay after all.

𝗘𝗣𝗛𝗘𝗠𝗘𝗥𝗔𝗟 | ☆ TBHK/JSHK x READER by v1naw1na

ＥＰＨＥＭＥＲＡＬ _____________________ TBHK/JSHK [ VARIOUS x GN. READER ] EPHEMERAL: „ meaning something that is short lived, such as a lifespan of a living creature or a period of time, like a summer. anything not permanent, or in more poetic words, "everything is temporary". - Raised by a family full of exorcists, (SURNAME) (FORENAME) had grown to know all about supernaturals and apparitions. They grew self aware that there are those who lurk the earth looking like anything besides your average being, people who have the ability to do what the norm cannot, people who others believe should be removed. Those people being exorcists, something they should become. But what if they didn't want to grow up and follow in their bloodline like their sibling had? What if they wanted to live a normal life without the unique vision of seeing what the average citizen cannot? What if they cared not to be dragged into a life involving inhumane beings, and just studied for a job they yearned for, for the rest of their life? Unfortunately, wants cannot always be haves, for this young student at Kamome Gakuen cannot escape the life of a person with seeing eyes. It all started with a school mystery, his assistant, an exorcist, and somebody who wanted nothing to do with the apparition life in the first place. A shame none of them could get what they want. Time is just far too short to let it happen. - - - PUBLISHED ; nov 23 2024 COMPLETED ; n/a STATUS ; ongoing - - - All rights go to the respective owners of the creators of Tbhk/Jshk. - Do not take heavy inspiration. Simple inspiration is fine, but taking my whole plot and character idea is beyond my comfort. Thanks for reading!

꒰ ˖ ࣪⊹💤𓂅 𝙙𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙢𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙤𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪... ミ🌱₊˚⟡ 💭 ꒱ (resident evil 4) by yourlocalcostco

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PAUBAYA by lizniz

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The Standouts - A Critique Contest by PAULAPDX (Summer 2019 Edition) by paulapdx

🛑 - CLOSED until 2021. ***If you're interested in my critiques, you might want to check out my weekly newsletter for opportunities to get a personalized critique. https://paula.substack.com/p/coming-soon Does your work stand out in an overly-crowded landscape? Does your story & writing shine as far as: ★ - Concept ★ - Voice ★ - Storytelling The Standouts is a fun, but hopefully helpful contest that can give you a sense of whether your story resonates with someone who's got some experience under her belt. Great! But who are you to judge? Fair question. This is not to humble-brag, but I've been critiquing and have worked with story development for quite some time, and I've picked up a lot along the way. ☙ - As an Ambassador, I work on content projects. ☙ - If you look at my profile, you'll see everything I've published so far has managed to standout in one way or another, whether by leading me to become a Wattpad Star; or by winning a Watty (twice!); or by being picked as a Top 10 in major Wattpad contests (twice!); or being featured. All I'm saying is I'm no slouch. I'm not brilliant either. But I've got some experience around what can catch an agent, editor, or judge's eye, and I'd like to share that with the community. ☙ - In another lifetime, I used to work for HBO in Development and at ICM (the talent agency) in their writers' department which means I understand how professionals quickly gauge whether or not they'll take a closer look at a work and/or make an offer. This kind of insight can be helpful if you're planning to submit your work or even just want to stand out more here on Wattpad. ☙ - I used to provide critiques for three writers, all of them traditionally published. They seemed to value my insight. Read the RULES, LOGISTICS & PRIZES chapter for guidelines. All entries get a brief assessment of their first chapter, with winners getting more extensive critiques. Sound interesting? Give it a go! 😊

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