The Creep
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Last published Thu, Aug 16, 2018
careen Jabir has been receiving very weird messages right her life complicated but doesn't know who they are from.
she decides to consult her new bestfriend replacement but things go wrong when she goes missing on the morning after prom. A month later, after her family reported a missing persons case, she is apparently found dead at old factory off Lake Shore street.
A postmotam shows that she was severely tortured till dead. Everything in Careen's life becomes more difficult than usual. The messages grow to be creepy yet demanding threats .
Can she do this alone ?..... Will Jake come to her aid or is he driven farther by her rejection? .... Will DaReen get back together?......
Join the heist as we unveal the identity of the unknown private number. Who is it ???? BUT he is always there and has crossed paths with her more than once........
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