Grey Clouds On The Horizon - Sneak Peak(s)
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Last published Fri, Nov 9, 2018
This is a potential storyline for my larger post Fifty Shades Freed fan fiction that I am working on. Really, that piece is something I love so much I don't want to release any of it until its perfect but I think getting some feedback will help it move along. So, that being said, PLEASE LEAVE FEEDBACK/COMMENTS. PM me, comment, give/withhold stars. I want to know.
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Trigger Warnings... Polygamy, Discipline, BDSM, Serious Illness... yeah just don't read it if you are triggered by anything at all
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