Surprise!
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Last published Mon, Oct 6, 2014
''Why do you even care so much?'' he bellowed into my face but I didn't even flinch: I was not to back down.
''Because I love you, you dumb fuck!'' I blurted out not thinking at all and for a moment I swear his face fell.
He shook his head in denial and retorted with the last words I expected to hear: ''You don't love me.''
I just stared at him. ''Yes I do!''
''Well I don't love you.''
~.~
Falling for the cynical prick is what I did. Smart, right? He wasn't the typical bad boy though, that would just be too much cliché for me to handle. Jesse is hiding something: I just know it. He knows something I don't or he's got a secret of his own. Most likely the latter and I can tell you now, when I found out, surprise is all I felt. It was just so unexpected. I really didn't know him at all, did I? What's the secret? Read to find out!
WARNING: Will include some strong language and sexual themes.
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