A Shattered Soul
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Last published Mon, Feb 15, 2021
Valden, a Kingdom always at war; renowned for their fighting prowess and cunning. For best friends Thomas and Ivan, growing up in this kingdom is not easy and as they are now 18, it is their turn to fill the ranks of Valden's massive military. While on the path to becoming soldiers, life takes them through twist and turns they weren't expecting. All the while an enemy plots to bring war and destruction to Valden.
***These are the first few chapters of a novel I am attempting to write. I'd really appreciate feedback and any ideas. Thank you so much for reading.***Cover is not mine (I am going to add more chapters as I get more typed)
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