Way of grief

I wrote this one night upon the realisation that I was a pretty lonely person in this world. It doesn't help that I'm a teenager, so these emotions are sort of melodramatic to the average person. Somehow, I feel like a lot of people would relate.

In terms of technique, I'm really winging it. I don't know the stanzas or formulas of a poem, so I'm really just formatting it in a way that sounds alright to me. In the near future, however, I intend to study more on how to write poems properly. The use of personification in the last sentence was heavily inspired by Elizabeth Barrett Browning's poem, Grief.