Tellus; A Fatal Deception (First Draft)
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(Update, this books title was edited due to request by another author of a book of the same name Tellus Chronicles. The book cover will shortly be update too.)
Note, this story will be rewritten, I've improved my writing skills since I wrote this. story.
Tellus; A Fatal Deception (Previously called The Demon's Gaze) is about an adventuring party of the small Guild Brightscars; who must defeat a demon that lie hidden inside an unknown dungeon, little do they know, they are all being manipulated into serving the demons plans.
This is a fantasy short story consisting of five parts in a fantasy setting, based in my own works of the unreleased novel Tellus, with battles and magic being at it's core with a bit of mystery and exploration. (This is my first published short story I have written and made public. Please leave a comment on what you think of my first ever release.) This is the first draft of the story, I know it isn't my best work and I am improving. If you'd like to see what I am truly capable of after writing this story, be sure to check out my more recent ('Better') stories I have written after improving. (In fact, please remember that I consider this story as pretty bad compared to my writing skills now.) Thanks.
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