The Pain (shiro x keith )

HI this is my first time making a story I read a lot of smut and yaoi so i mean I day dream about this stuff and make up a lot of storys so i try to make videos but when I read other peoples smut I think of myself as trash but you know I want to see if my storys are actually good and some people will read this anyway just read the story and tell me what you think bye~