Beta Reading of my MafiaFell Fanfic

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This obviously  isn't completely fleshed out yet, I'll be adding covers and titles eventually, but until then I've leave the first chapter posted. It's open for comments so please give me your input! I'd greatly appreciate it! :DAll Rights Reserved

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Chapter 1: Run Away
Sat, Aug 18, 2018

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Chapter 1: Run Away
Sat, Aug 18, 2018

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