Not So Cliche, huh?

Not So Cliche, huh?

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They say everything starts with a spark... Some sparks last only a minute in time, but others can last a lifetime. The spark of life for instance is the one that started everything, the spark of thought can only last a second, it all depends on the way you use or abuse it. But, throughout all these sparks that are known, the spark of your life is the spark that shows you all the different sparks in life that you decide follow. I, for one, decided to follow the wrong spark at the wrong time which resulted in me losing friends and family and the three people that meant the most to me and still do, this spark resulted in me losing all that I had and all that I ever will have... The spark I followed was the one into the wrong crowd of people, the people who sooner ended my life mentally and in some ways physically. I got pushed to the edge of the cliff many times by these people, the thoughts of them and their messages I receive through social media networks… My spark shows a story of trust, betrayal and most of all love, love for the people I have in my life, this may sound as cliché as it can get, a girl who got betrayed but found love in family and friends, but my story isn’t, along the line of betrayal I lost my friends that meant the most to me, friends who don’t know what happened to me, friends who said ‘one day, you suddenly turned quiet, you won’t speak nor tell anyone here what’s wrong so what is the point in you being with us at dinner time, what will it come to when we get picked as your partners for oracy exams? You’re just not worth the struggle anymore.’ This is the spark that decided on the rest of my life, the spark that ended it…
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John is a normal kid. Kind of. {So he chooses to think.} And he thinks a lot. Like... a *lot*. About the world. About people. About things that {probably don't matter} but feel like they do. And he has this voice in his head. [He calls it Spark.] {I know what you're thinking}, but Spark isn't evil or creepy or anything. He's just... him, albeit slightly louder, slightly weirder, and way more honest. They've always talked to each other. For as long as they can remember. [It's normal. Probably.] Until Spark starts doing things John doesn't remember doing- like catching a dodgeball with zero reaction time. {Now he has questions.} Not just about Spark, but about himself. And about a stranger stranger than him that [keeps popping up.] no matter where he goes. This isn't a story about going crazy. It's about trust, [weird brain conversations], and {quiet moments}. I hope you can see that. [Sidenote: This story is currently a draft and subject to edits/rewrites.] {What?? Why?} [Because it isn't complete? Jeez, thought you would pick up on that...] {Sorry, should've thought of that.} [Should we be breaking the fourth wall like this?] {Meh. It doesn't really matter; it's just a book description.} [And should we be doing all of this in the book description-?] {...fair point.}

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