The Black Raven
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Ongoing5m
Last published Wed, Mar 25, 2020
Hey guys! First of all, I want to thank you for stopping by.
This is the first chapter of a story I am currently writing.
Well here goes nothing...
The story is about a shapeshifter pack in a little town that is mostly run by them but with humans around that know nothing and the weather there is heavily affected by the moon cycle.
The Alpha family is also a witch coven (too much?) and something weird seems to be happening to the Alpha's daughter.
I know this description kind of sucks but the story is nowhere near finished and probably won't be for a long time but bear with me.
If you could give the first chapter a quick read and tell me what you think, I would really appreciate it.
If you like the idea and if you would want to read more, leave a comment.
Any and all constructive criticism is welcomed as long as it's polite.
Thank you very much!
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