A cute crush

Harry is a kindergartner who finds it hard to blend in with others until he is placed in a new group. He is bullied for his difference and he finds comfort from that other boy called Louis. Louis however is very favored among girls. Together they dream big and stand up against bullies.

Picture I found from http://jaii-jay-eisener.tumblr.com/post/44279217287/tears?ref=weheartit
It's so cute!

Any criticism is welcome! It's my first story! So basically my baby.