after the abyss
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Complete Thu, Aug 23, 20185m
a diffrent ending to the story "journey to the center of the earth"
it's a test to see if my writing skills are good enough
please comment for any kind of issue ( grammar, rules things that are just wrong)
also it's 2 small chapters but I don't know yet how long a chapter has to be sorry about that
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