Emotional Baggage

Every now and then I have a little try at some Flash Fiction, with the help from random prompts I discover.

This prompt was 'Someone goes to extreme lengths to return something'...
I think I have sort of created a little story from that, sort of spiraled off into my own idea.

I haven't drafted and edited this alot, I would like to get some feedback for it considering its the first bit of writing I have done in months!

I'm not going to explain too much about the story, I want to see if you get the idea...