The Goblin King

This story was inspired by the movie The Labyrinth with David Bowie. I wanted to write this story because I remember being in my living room with some friends and watching this movie thinking of how awesome it was. It's truly a unique story and for those who have seen the movie, I hope that I portrayed a little of modern life to some of the movie. As you know, I quoted a few lines from the movie when Sarah's brother was being taken away. If you don't mind, comments on the story and comments about if I should add more or not. Thank you all a lot! And remember, keep reading.