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Have you ever been in a room full of criminals who all wanted to kill you? Have you been tortured have to death? Adriane has. She had no family left, no one to turn to except her 3 bestfriends. They do odd jobs to keep rich. The mafia owe them money. Read as they cross the world stealing what was rightfully theirs.
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