Mermaids | 2009 & 2016
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elfoxwood
Complete, First published Sep 03, 2018
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"It's not what it seems." ~The Swan Princess (film)~

A comparison of a poem I wrote in 2009 (or 2010), and the rewrite in 2016.

Which one do you like? :P

Cover by @TheTigerWriter
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