[CLOSED] Charlotte Mallory's Hedgehog Reviews

My focus is primarily on immersion. If I were to pick this up on Amazon or at Barnes & Nobles, how immersed would I be? Once I start to read it, can I even put it down? The more immersion you build for your reader, the more likely your book will find success. If I'm not immersed, I'll give you tips on why, and how to potentially improve that.